Imaginarywishes

1yr

Replied to Doverow

Ah yes, Florida for reference

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The Rise of the Black Plain

Fantasy · RVN_1998

Imaginarywishes

1yr

Commented

not gonna lie this is cringe

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GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS

Urban · Lordflash

Imaginarywishes

1yr

Posted

The story was nice up until the 27 years in the past part. Also if Azzy (I totally didn't forget the spelling of his actual name) is the heir of the clan then why wasn't he getting better training for the first 3 years?

My Soul card is a Reaper

Fantasy · Snowstar

Imaginarywishes

1yr

Posted

Look I won't consider myself as a woke person by any means but this book definitely objectifies women. Also quick advice for the author, if you describe every woman in the story as beautiful then being beautiful would have no significance anymore. Oh and also there's grammatical mistakes. Lots of them.