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you can use Chat gpt or hire some proofreader for your help

eager to see how the story progress.............too few chapter to say more, let's see if it is another author who wrote on a whim and would not continue after some chapters or a making of masterpiece.

so far the story is interesting, specially the fact that unlike other apocalypse novels where mc always works alone----so illogical and irrational----------here our mc has a group of people as friends who support him.....i would like to continue seeing this group develop into a formidable force. my only complaint would be stability of updates.

it seems intriguing so far but nothing can be said yet as there are too few chapters.......................................................................

I am having doubts as to whether should i start this or not. i saw the updated and i can say i am not happy with them you started this novel 7 months ago and for 7 months no updated you only started updating 4 days prior......so plz entertain me as to why should i give it a try even if the synopsis seems quite intriguing

ok brother...and good luck for your upcoming examinations coincidentally i also have examinations around that time as i am in college and currently studying animation.

That's bid sad to know. but oh well!!!....best of luck for your upcoming exams brother. also when will u return with second novel?

just one word.....amazing. it is one of the best kingdom building novel i have ever read. i am excited to see how will the story develop and it will be great if we can get a mass release

quite an interesting book you have here, I like the aspect of conquering the whole world. another good thing to point out would be the SYSTEM---- it's different from the usual you see nowadays.......it doesn't spoon feed our main character everything ....that i quite like....i am very excited to see how will the story unfold. here is a suggestion i would like to give------plz don't make our character a one man army....he is trying to conquer a world....and no one can conquer a whole world by themselves...he should build an army of SPIRITS BEASTS as well as his COMPANIONS as well......i would love to see a proper kingdom building in making here.

I find myself drawn to this amazing story of yours and wish to accompany you on the great journey of the main character, however i have a suggestion that i sincerely hope you apply.........as i can see there will be great battle for throne......so please don't do the cliche of making him the one man army...... to be honest it is not practical ........but if he develops his own army through the journey, which also includes his parents.....it will be amazing.