Ok, untill now I have read 9 chapters and the story is getting wholesome. the concept of the story is wholesome. I think the plot will get wider. The suspence is good. The Idea is good. I can hope this story will get to its highest quality but author need to work on the dialogues. Though it can be overseen since it is your first. But overall mindblowing story. Recommended!
War · The_Author65
Actually I am a advanture and action genre's fan. I Don't usually ready romantic novel. But somehow I came here and read the novel . And it is actually pretty good. Though it is a new novel but I hope the story will keep up its quality...
Fantasy · LadyE101
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Ok, untill now I have read 9 chapters and the story is getting wholesome. the concept of the story is wholesome. I think the plot will get wider. The suspence is good. The Idea is good. I can hope this story will get to its highest quality but author need to work on the dialogues. Though it can be overseen since it is your first. But overall mindblowing story. Recommended!
Megaverse
War · The_Author65