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I liked the story, the only bad thing is the number of chapters and the delay to be released. ...............................................

Author tries to create moments of tension where there is no time for it, an example of this is the MC facing opponents who are strong for his base form, but in his oozaru form would be easily resolved.

Can you tell me if he continues to help strangers without getting anything in return? In chapter 52 he helps a boy who lost his mother and the boy has nothing to offer, doing that in the apocalypse is the same as killing himself, so I would like to know if he continues with this so as not to waste my time anymore.

I used Goolde Translator so there may be errors. I'm currently reading the Chinese version and to get stressed about these communists it's very easy, in chapter 52 mc helps a random boy who lost his mother, the mc offers him food and helps him without anything in return, not to mention that this boy is dead weight . I recommend that you change these facts and make a darker and more calculating protagonist (he really makes a villain), without helping random people unless you get something in return, based on these changes you could make your own fanfic, since from what I'm seeing MC tends to get worse.

Very good fanfic so far, i hope for more chapters and i hope for a darker mc. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I liked it a lot, I hope for more chapters. [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]

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Very good story. [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]

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I liked it, there just needs to be more chapters to improve. Good story, I liked the way the protagonist acts, I hope it continues to have good development.

the work has some holes in the plot and ''divine intervention'', these elements take away from the fun of the work, in addition to the inclusion of meaningless things like Thor's hammer. If you removed these things the work would be much better. The author presents the new brook winning the yami yami no mi out of nowhere, it would be better for him to randomly find the fruit than for it to fall out of nowhere.

It has good writing, character development and chronology. The only bad thing is the low number of chapters, but given that it is a recent work that is normal, I look forward to more chapters of this wonderful work.