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Ferzd

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Damn, this is probably the best novel I have read on webnovel. I was skeptical at first since the title was pretty eh and the synopsis was generic but damn I was pleasantly surprised. Good points: The MC is multidimensional. (Which is extremely rare in this platform) The writing quality is phenomenal. The writing felt very immersive and hit the emotional beats pretty well. But by far the best point about this novel is how this novel takles emotions and how it explores them. Many authors especially in the fantasy genre tend to stay away from emotions as they are hard to write and make the main character look weak and "beta" to the edgy teenagers that make up the majority of demographic. This story does the opposite and explores emotions and memories in a very interesting way. Bad points: The magic system is generic. It's not awful but it certainly isn't something too interesting too think about. The world itself is also pretty meh. (Of course this may change since this story is still pretty new.) But as of chapter 162~ the world doesn't feel that unique from many other modern-medieval fantasy stories. I think a little bit more world building would be better but then again it's not a story about the world but the characters so this point is not very important. ... Now some other miscellaneous points: 1)Your previous book TAPOV was.. in the nicest way I can put this.. not that good. The characters were very bland and boring. But this story has decent character writing and good dialogue it's a huge improvement from the previous one. 2) Correct me if I am wrong but I think you took inspiration from "SSS class suicide hunter". Especially the tragic beats of the story are written in a somewhat similar way to it. This is in no way a complaint as I think it's done amazingly. It's just an observation. ... In conclusion, I think this story has a great story, decent characters, a likeable protagonist and alot of potential. World building and magic systems could be improved upon by making it more nuanced but that's not that big of a problem. I think the story has fantastic pacing and overall is a really fun read. I am curious where you take this. Thank you for writing, author. I hope you excel. ... 8.5/10. Love it.

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Seriously speaking, Don't try this at home. You will fall down and fracture your skull if you're unlucky.

The hardest of all was the one that consisted of walking down the stairs using the hands instead of the feet. It might seem simple at first, and so I had thought the first time he had told me to do it. But in reality, walking down the stairs using your hands was actually an extremely extenuating training for your whole body. 

Sussy Baka in MHA

Sussy Baka in MHA

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If only circuit diagrams were so simple irl

But Lynn was different. Having successfully grasped the concept of the alchemy array as a Muggle circuit diagram, he saw the array not as thousands of complex forms, but simply as two basic configurations: series and parallel connections. This understanding simplified the learning process immensely.

Harry Potter: The God of Ice and Fire at Hogwarts

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I like your taste tho

(-Coyote Theory / This Side of Paradise-)

MHA: The Musician

MHA: The Musician

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Interesting taste

His fingers moved quickly, searching for Shiloh Dynasty, XXXTentacion, Laufey, Joji, dv4d, Rex Orange County, Bruno Mars, Neon Trees, Ricky Montgomery...

MHA: The Musician

MHA: The Musician

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Also, I hope I don't sound rude, I am not trying to be, It's not everyday i get to talk about Political systems especially in webnovel of all places.

"Nah, forget about it." I said with a shrug. The idea of democracy or something similar would be too foreign for them. It was a bad idea.

More than a Dragon Warrior

More than a Dragon Warrior

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Denmark is a constitutional monarchy basically democracy with a mascot

"Nah, forget about it." I said with a shrug. The idea of democracy or something similar would be too foreign for them. It was a bad idea.

More than a Dragon Warrior

More than a Dragon Warrior

Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn

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UAE, Qatar, etc are rich because resources and low population, their government has fuck all to do with it.

"Nah, forget about it." I said with a shrug. The idea of democracy or something similar would be too foreign for them. It was a bad idea.

More than a Dragon Warrior

More than a Dragon Warrior

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Roman empire was originally a republic and the moment it got a emperor few emperor's later it collapsed ever heard of the third century crisis?

"Nah, forget about it." I said with a shrug. The idea of democracy or something similar would be too foreign for them. It was a bad idea.

More than a Dragon Warrior

More than a Dragon Warrior

Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn

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Such as Dictatorship, Absolute Monarchy, Aristocracy, or Gang rule?

"Nah, forget about it." I said with a shrug. The idea of democracy or something similar would be too foreign for them. It was a bad idea.

More than a Dragon Warrior

More than a Dragon Warrior

Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn

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