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Very good ch, mc character is improving , but a slight reminder, like mc, other people characters are growing too, the only consideration that has to be kept is mc doesn’t lags behind others. For example if others try to make up for their mistakes or do something for mc, mc too should not lag behind in attaining emotional maturity unlike other romcom books where our mc stays dense and hesitant/fleeting throughout his character xd

Hello the development is going fine. Since you asked for opinion I will say that mc should not leave or abandon his gf right now as currently she is in a very vulnerable and shaken state. If mc leaves her right now then he too will be become a hypocrite as he decided to run away or brush aside her matter completely even after knowing her full forced situation with Chiku. In this way, he too will become like her who doesn’t want to solve the problem by working together plus the biggest point is if mc leaves then it will leave a permanent mark of regret on his mind where he could have done better as a good bf…… because in all honestly such a girl can even kill Herself in suicide or take some extreme step to do harm on herself in an act of self-regret which if mc knows later after leaving then it would definitely leave a heavy and sad regretful expression on his mind which may even leave a permanent shadow from which he may never be able to move on. Because I have seen in many books the girl usually start doing foolish things or harm herself when Mc leaves then mc blames on himself later saying he could have been a better person plus the gap created causes mc to confide in other girls which provides soothing relief thus adding more girls in the situation leading to a harem situation where readers are conflicted on which heroines to choose and story starts getting clumsy. The better way I suggest is that mc takes control of the situation and properly tames Emma and starts his journey to take revenge this is a perfect situation where he can make his yandere ex gf who is in desperate need of redemption accept his demands. She should be willing to make any concessions asked right now no matter how stubborn and grumpy her possessive personality is. Mc can also use this opportunity to make her accept his contact with other girls or tell her she will now have to listen to him and can’t interfere in whom he wants to talk to or tell her she is now in a trial period and her performance will tell future action or things similar while at the same time he starts his revenge journey on chiko and starts unravelling other mysteries.

Now the story is looking much better and refined, very good job author. That’s how one should act maturely, confront and discuss properly, only then we can prevent any further manipulation and stress, and instead work together to save our future while in the process the one who have made mistakes redeem themselves with their actions.

Yeah man on the one hand you are portraying that how much love and possessiveness Emma as a gf has towards mc while on the other hand you are continuously showing her as weak and afraid to confide in mc type who is always hiding things from mc instead of working together with him to solve their problems. Making her act and seem like a cheater even though you clearly said it’s not a cheating or a ntr type of book. Plus this drama is literally taking too long just like those FL misunderstanding books where such things stretches for 35 or 40 chapters or sometimes more or those online romantic dramas. If you take too long to develop the other readers might lose interest, hope everything with mc and Ema is sorted fast and they are together. Going with current pace, the mc development seems too slow, he instead of properly discussing and mending things with his gf and other people is acting on impulses just like a small child. Other than that writing quality is maintained.

Sure I will definitely check other books as long Mc girlfriends or girls don’t cheat on him or sleep with others. Hope you have a good day.

It’s about time that ema is fully tamed by mc.

Great ch, ema seems a very possessive girlfriend which makes her look more adorable, hope mc can be direct like her and directly confide in her about the person who sent message on her phone, and their misunderstanding gets cleared very soon. She can be his best teammate with her current character. It seems she is forced or threatened because of some reason, I hope mc can team up with her to solve that mysterious person threatening or plotting against her.

Author said Emma loves mc a lot and there is no cheating thing is there are lots of misunderstandings which will be cleared by mc as his character progresses. Plus author mentioned two times before already that mc is not ntred or get cheated upon, this is not that sort of book.

Good ch.

Thanks for the chapter can you please answer my question asked in book review section wether mc is a cuck and will lose his girlfriend ? The one from whom his girlfriend will be stolen please reply to my question asked in review section thank you dear.

Actually both of those have similar starting to the mtl version but in 2-4 chs the storyline changes completely.

Amazing

Op