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to continue my comment: Richard/Belle; Eric, Erica, and Hayden. The things that I would recommend working on, and I know it can be hard to do when you're trying to pump out so many chapters in a day to keep your fan base happy, is add a spell check and grammar program to the format you use for you novels. This way most of the typographic and grammar errors will automatically be corrected or suggested as you type or speak. This will also help if you duplicate pages or chapters in the novel. Just a simple suggestion, I'm not a writer, but it helps me when I have to do my assignments for class and work. Good luck with your future novels and I look forward to reading more of your work ❤️

I truly appreciated the story line, plot, and characters. I especially loved the nice nasty side of Nathaniel and Nicholas; it added an extra edge to the book and made it more interesting than just a simple love story. The family connection was a nice twist but I saw it coming when Hayden's eyes were mentioned and the fact that Aunty Sally was a twin and she'd died. I'm happy you didn't drag out the attraction between the two leading characters and allowed them to explore their feelings and emotions and express their love for one another and not go through the break up and make up to prolong your story line. You that to fill it with so much more interesting stuff that can be used to do sequels from this book, i.e, Nicholas/Diana; Belle/