This review makes me not want to read this novel.
Tbf Naruto was supposed to end like way earlier than expected and I felt that all the lore past during and after shippuden was a little rushed. I mean some parts feel fleshed out but still.
Disclaimer: I am in no way discrediting Kishimoto, he's a genius artist and creator. But even the greatest things have their flaws.
Anime & Comics · CYANOMN1VORE
I like to think that the reason why Jiran is so gifted at air bending is because he embodies air ability to adapt and change showcased with his personality
"Dead man… funny words." Then as if a bipolar person, Jiran's expression went from smiling to pure menace.
Anime & Comics · Marcus_Adderley
Wow what a way to start. I really like how creative your premise is and how consistent you are with your writing. I’m really looking forward to more chapters
ch 0 2 Prologue: The Judgement Day
Sci-fi · Rhaelur
Ty for the chapter
ch 11 Visit to Memory Land
Book&Literature · The_Greedy_Frog
Omg character growth!
Well, I'll eat with my fingers.
Anime & Comics · Nar_cisse
I think a big problem with a lot of fanfics is this constant need to use power and strength of justifiers for good storytelling. I think the story would be fine just exploring failsafe as a character as they are now as I find this trope of an ai gaining sentience really cool thing to think about
ch 15 Hoodwinked
Anime & Comics · Lord_Sadness
Same but I like it way more like
ch 0 8 Time
Anime & Comics · Lord_Sadness
tailed beast cant get killed only sealed bc they are all made up of chakra. They are like massive cannons that can be pointed at anyone
ch 0 1 1. Child of Chakra
Anime & Comics · MisterImmortal
but it is pretty clear that our mc has no ambition, he also has no goal for the future and no reason to live nor does he have one to kill himself. so what our mc does instead is stick to what he normally does, watch movies all day on the sofa.
ch 0 3 CHAPTER 02
Movies · Draul_TheOminous
just like me fr
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Eastern · Adamo_Amet
this would be cool. i like rapheal thou
(You guys can decide it.)
Anime & Comics · Siebog
please do not say he slept with little girls.
i would actually disagree. i like how the author is using niche or underused abilities in the naruto world that the original author didn't fully utilize
ch 92 The Chunin Exams - 18
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
nah this foul
Fujin looked at her and chuckled internally thinking, 'Well you've got 2 years to surpass Madara. RIP'
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
Absolutely amazing my only gripe is that you should change the cover art because the current one makes it seem like it is smut.
Naruto : Uchiha Clan
Anime & Comics · sybife