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dude really? At least do a proper review
How often do you plan in uploading chapters?
ch 0 4 Bel Vs Proto-Tyrant
Resident Evil: Ars Goetia
Video Games · Petit_Gateau
yep and I don't know why they critizice the grammar there are a lot of novels with worse grammar... apart this one has quite good grammar and the story is solid so I like it like it already is.
ch 25 [Not A Chapter] Clarification On WHY I WROTE This FANFIC
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Anime & Comics · SchadenFriday
difficulty of witting*
ch 25 [Not A Chapter] Clarification On WHY I WROTE This FANFIC
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Well said xD not a lot of people see the difficulty of reading or thing about the author. I for example criticized a fanfic for grammar mistakes but it was because the author was always confusing he/she that it was impossible to understand if the MC was a boy or a girl sometimes so I said to revise and use just one of the two. Or revise for repetitions. But it was more of a constructive critic. I know it's difficult and I don't critizice to annoy, if I critizice is for a constructive critic that can help.
ch 25 [Not A Chapter] Clarification On WHY I WROTE This FANFIC
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please revise the use of pronouns it confuses me a lot that sometimes you refer to the MC as a boy and sometimes as a girl also the mobile is an object so the pronoun is IT and please revise what you write after doing it there are some grammar errors(that's not that important but you sometimes repeat thing that have already been said like two words before.) but apart from that that is annoying because it confuses me it's good the story for now continue with your work :c
ch 0 2 Beyond All Dimensional Chat Group
Dimension-Defying Chat Syndicate
Anime & Comics · Bakakeju
Just ignore the bad reviews your novel is quite good and I like it a lot don't let them get to your head there is a lot of toxic people after all... I've seen reviews that doesn't even make sense after all...
ch 417 Volume 5 – Chapter 33(Stormterror III)
Ordverse Ascension
Anime & Comics · Lakshay_Thakur_9837
Noice chap. And never expected you to use those eyes... I always think that those eyes have potential for fanfic etc but I don't usually see them being used...
ch 19 Mystic Eyes Of Death Perception
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noice chap
ch 18 Alien's Abandoned Secret Base
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And even with that it is not a reason to just insult the work of the author. Like he could have said it differently and in a more constructive way if you know what I mean.
Tsukasa muttered, "Husband is so bold and shameless."
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Anime & Comics · SchadenFriday
that's the way the original tsukasa uses to refer to her husband in the original manga and anime. The author is just using her original personality instead of creating a new one. A thing that I appreciate a lot because it is difficult to do but it is also something that shows that he thinks about the details. Something that a lot of fanfics don't do and that makes ones shine more than others. But I can see your point.
Tsukasa muttered, "Husband is so bold and shameless."
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hmm... interesting noice chap now I wanna the next :'c
ch 16 How To End Tsukasa's Immortality
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Dude... I've read a lot of Chinese novels and the writing style is not similar to the one of this fanfic... Like they are two completely different worlds... And if you are saying that because she is being bold in the relationship then first: the writing style is still different. Second: in Chinese novels girls aren't that bold in romantic relationships and third: if it was Chinese writing style tha phrasing would have been different and more self-sentered. If you want to annoy an author by giving him toxic comments at least make them having actual sense...
Tsukasa muttered, "Husband is so bold and shameless."
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In the time I wrote this joke someone send a comment first xD
ch 15 Immortal Shapeshifting Clothes Set
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noice first comment xD oh, and noice chap too
ch 15 Immortal Shapeshifting Clothes Set
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PERFECT!!!! Now let's read how poor tsukasa gets embararassedin the next chap... I wanna read it now but I can't till tomorrow... :'c
\Sairyoku-sama has marked his calendars day per day while waiting for Tsukasa-sama's arrival. Sairyoku-sama has kept those two years' worth of marked calendars in his room.\
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nice chap :c
ch 13 Restoration Ability And The Third Magic: Heaven's Feel
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noice
"The only thing I needed to know is that my existence isn't canon in Tonikawa. So I can no longer think of Tsukasa based on what I know about canon in Tonikaku Kawaii. Either way, that doesn't change my love for Tsukasa."
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nice chap
ch 11 Finally Meeting Tsukasa
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yes I get that you hate the novel but If you do a review have the minimum decency of explaining what it is that you dislike or give a proper reason instead of being a moron and only writing whatever stupidity you can think of to give a bad review just to feel better about yourself. How about trying writing yourself and see if it is that easy? Apart that I know that you don't even put the effort because you always do the same in all fanfics where you appear, you only know how to be a toxic reader that doesn't know how to appreciate the effort of others and that only wants to feel better about himself by giving shity messages that have zero sense sometimes. Like this one if it is a comment ok like you hate it but this is not a review this is just a message to annoy the author so you can feel better with your shity toxic existence. And I may sound stupid because I haven't read this fanfic yet but as you can't even do a proper review I had to make you understand you know? A wait that you can't even comprehend why that wasn't a review because you don't get it right? After all if you can't understand something so simple it's normal for you to be like that I suppose.
Beyond Miraculous: The Awakening of Magic
TV · Demon624