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too many filler & unfunny jokes.

It's getting better at least you are reducing sim city wanna be, building is good but if you are focusing too much on building or buying furniture for every 1-3 chapters are boring. Hashirama should go against Sengoku bc both of them are using budha as icon and Garp should go against a hand-to-hand combat like Hanma's family (Baki, his brother or father) or others anime. You are improving but still lack of using new words, but overall is getting better.

A king too much focus with what the hell furnitures, sands, stone, whatever it is. Mc is a king so please act like a wise king, not fucking low wages mc check on cable, stone, house and many more. Keep it simple with fucking butler or prime minister and let the do their jobs on sim city bullshit and give simple report or update about your kingdom and focus more about a real one piece world.

There is no story so far, it is just an arrogant mc wanna be but there are really no story behind his arrogant. Stupid novel with stupid author who do not understand about novel and how to create it.

Bring peace is six path asked for but mc is killing everyone, so what's the point six path trained him for? Made him a fanatic killer? Lol.. Author is just couldnt make a good plot, it messed up since the very start!

One piece is a world of adventure where body, mind, soul, technology and mythology are in one set you have already added another body, mind, and soul from different manga so you should add more story about technology or mythology (marvel-dc or maybe WOW).