This was too sad and the first time a written story made me 馃槶
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Last Day
Anime & Comics 路 Isfet_12
This chapter made me feel like the mc is weak minded and controlled by their emotions and I really don't like stories like that so I'm dropping this.
ch 0 4 4. The Battle Part-01
Anime & Comics 路 ChaosVoid_24
I hope he find the tomb soon and I also hope the mc isn't some goody two shoes that saves everyone they see.
ch 0 4 Arrival in the New World II
Anime & Comics 路 GhostVim
Very good story so far and a suggestion I have is an ability to get stronger as his subordinates do like having them marked in the soul or something where if they gain power he also gains that or gains a part of what they gain.
ch 0 2 Prologue II
Anime & Comics 路 GhostVim
Enri should stayed dead. [img=faceslap] Tyft chapter though.
ch 45 New World VIII
Anime & Comics 路 PrimisOptimus
Sorry not human incarnated it could be a diff race of heteromorphic
ch 44 New World VII
Anime & Comics 路 PrimisOptimus
Nice chapter!
ch 37 Yggdrasil XXXV
Anime & Comics 路 PrimisOptimus
Npc suggestion: Ken Kaneki starting race is zombie then the advancement of zombie somewhere along the line ends up as ghoul but much stronger and better abilities than in the anime or ghoul could be a different advancement line in the vampire race or come up with a ghoul character yourself with inspiration from Tokyo Ghoul Hogwarts monster guardian could be a phoenix with the fire teleportation like in Harry Potter with many other flame like abilities with crazy regeneration.
ch 36 Yggdrasil XXXIV
Anime & Comics 路 PrimisOptimus
Not sure who it should be but for the torturer(please don't rake only female suggestions into consideration) they should not only be a torturer or if they are make a separate npc for locking prisoners up or like a warden presiding over a prison(could be its own floor that isn't normally accessible but make the warden npc specialise in capturing and keeping people/monsters locked up and keeping beings in certain places like cells not sure what the build for an npc like that would be but they could be heavily buffed in a prison or something. Also for the pokemon suggestion thing, in the pokemon show there are little things that are wrong with them or "weaknesses" you could say, you could just modify them so they don't have it or lessen it idk. Also I strongly recommend Latios and Latias for you to make because they have good abilities and you can make them even stronger. Not for a crazy suggestion during the long time skip you said you wanted to do you could make a whole crazy large floor filled with pokemon like the actual pokemon world, idk how that would be possible but that has just been on my mind for a cool idea for a while and I just thought if I didn't share it I would be mad at myself. The pokemon would have authority over stuff like "rules". I was just imagining the mc putting some random person from another world into that floor and just watching what they would do in it(they wouldn't be able to just kill a whole bunch of pokemon because of Zygarde and his watching).
ch 36 Yggdrasil XXXIV
Anime & Comics 路 PrimisOptimus
I laughed so hard at the start when he said he was so smart and bored then used the wrong your. 馃槀
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Hey author idk if you know pokemon but for custom monsters can you make one or more legendary pokemon npcs like mew, celebi, jirachi etc they could also have human forms,and if you do give them human forms pls don't make them all female.
ch 35 Yggdrasil XXXIII
Anime & Comics 路 PrimisOptimus
Overthinking*
ch 32 Yggdrasil XXX
Anime & Comics 路 PrimisOptimus
Jesus idiots like this guy make me want to stab my eye out. I feel like torturing people like this.
ch 15 Chapter 15 Sode Shirayuki鈥橲 Level? I Will Set My Own Criteria For Judging
Jujutsu Kaisen: I'm Gojo twin brother creating zanpakuto (jjk)
Anime & Comics 路 Ahmed_Riaz