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Just finished this novel. Overall, it's a fairly relaxed one. While the MC peruses strength, it's not the amin focus. Rather, the author focuses on his somewhat relaxed life, his interactions with the FMS and their steamy nights together. Speaking of that, the sex scenes are very well written with vibrant descriptions. The progress with FMS, while at first, happens slowly, later it picks up the pace. And he also had sex with his cousin and later his aunt (Technically-you will find out why) at the very last chapter. So, a very big plus for the incest lovers out there. At the beginning, you will see that MC doesn't show his emotions much. And he doesn't care about his women too much in the beginning as well (NO NTR, don't worry about that). But things get better at the later chapters. He starts taking his women seriously, builds romantic bonds with them and shows great affection. He even makes one of them pregnant. And the female characters are described vividly, and each has their unique personalities. And best of all, they are nor forgotten as the story progresses. And they are mentioned quite often, with enough screen-time as well, which is a big plus for me. So overall, it's a nice blend of magic-cultivation and steamy relationships. Cons: There are some grammatical mistakes, but it doesn't affect the reading experience much. For example- Use of pronouns (He/She). Like females are sometimes referred with He and males with She. And this didn't bother me much, but it depends on each person. And another thing is that the story was quite rushed at the last few chapters. The MC got huge power boost like Going from Official Magus realm to Magus God (skipping 4 realms directly). I mean I would rather the power ups be spread throughout the story even if it's frequent. But then again, the novel's main focus was not that. But the author did explain that his writing quality would worsen if he forced himself to continue writing. So, taking that into consideration, the rushed ending can be justified.

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