Webnovel Author: Lirika_Marchen - Novel Collection

A rather unusual story about a boy and a girl in the entourage of a supernatural fantasy. There is everything here, a complex with its own rules, black rooms, researchers and endless tests. And there are also subjects here who day and night dream of escaping from this place and remembering who they are and where their place is in this world. It is a pity that the chapters in this work are so short that you just start reading them and delving into the essence of the problem, and they are already ending. Thank you for the work done by the author, I wish you good luck! With respect, L. Marchen.

Author, I greet you. It's a fascinating story, but it sinks under various flaws. Of course, this is my subjective point and I don't want to offend you. I recommend rephrasing sentences with a large number of pronouns "I", and also adding quotation marks for direct speech. Perhaps at the beginning of the story you should add a brief reference, "Who is who", so that later there will be no confusion. Who is Andrey? He's the boss's assistant. Clear. And who is this. Kelvin. Okay. Thanks for the story. It is clear that you have made best effort to write it. I will definitely finish it. :) Respectfully, L. Machen.