so nerissa is in charge, got it [img=recommend]
"You are leaving? Should we come with you?" Gabrielle asked, prompting me to shake my head and hands. "No. No. That's ok. You just stay here and enjoy yourself. When I am back, we will play some games, have some fun. Ok? Just. Be right back. Orchid, you are in charge. Make sure no one gets into trouble. Nerissa, make sure Orchid doesn't get into trouble."
The hivemind is conquering for me?
Sci-fi · Ben_Cresswell
that's not what I meant. it's just that it didn't flow right. it was kind of mended later, but still, it feels a bit forced. idk how else to explain it.
Valerica then looked back down on her data pad, fiddling with something for a good twenty seconds. "Orchid Lambdason." Valerica stated and looked towards Orchid. 'Oh she is going to hate me for this...' She thought as Orchid raised her hand and looked at Apollo with that loving smile that the two 'siblings' so often shared. "Sigfried Pallasus."
The hivemind is conquering for me?
Sci-fi · Ben_Cresswell
tbh this is the first time something felt truly forced. at least for me.
Valerica then looked back down on her data pad, fiddling with something for a good twenty seconds. "Orchid Lambdason." Valerica stated and looked towards Orchid. 'Oh she is going to hate me for this...' She thought as Orchid raised her hand and looked at Apollo with that loving smile that the two 'siblings' so often shared. "Sigfried Pallasus."
The hivemind is conquering for me?
Sci-fi · Ben_Cresswell
the chonk should have a character card at this point. she is integral to the story.
and the bad thing about that is?
Looking down at Valerica who was looking up curiously, I smiled and stated. "Looks like I beat the teacher, I have her pinned down with nowhere to go. Do I get to become a guardian now?"
The hivemind is conquering for me?
Sci-fi · Ben_Cresswell
what about Sol then?
man, I can't believe I already caught up with the releases. waiting to read daily is going to be a pain in the ass. but anyway, it's good to finally be back here after a few months.
arguably the best psionic power one could have. and it's also unique, so only he has it
Jason was still in thought going over what every Psionic ability he said was and what they could possibly mean from context, though one did leave him stumped. 'What's chonk?'
The hivemind is conquering for me?
Sci-fi · Ben_Cresswell
late happy birthday Ben. despite everything, I appreciate a lot the work you put into writing this novel.
"The mindspace." is said twice in succession in isolated sentences.
The hivemind is conquering for me?
Sci-fi · Ben_Cresswell