CozyBeast - Profile

I like the fic, but i am super confused at the moment with the interactions between Jacket and Suit… like, they are both Hifumi, but Suit is written in a way where the connection between the two seems like they are not? Im very interested in them meeting again so i can get some sort of recollection - i kinda think i missed how he divvied himself up… So far the fic is great and i like the characters you introduce.. Especially since you use very unusual animes in the way that they are often overlooked or rarely used by other writers! I cant really criticise the current arc since i havent really watched the anime, so apart from you resummarising the connection/division of mc (Hes disguised as Suit? But im not sure?) i can really only suggest that you write about the devils side more to get pespective on both sides. Good job on the fic so far tho mate.

I really love the concept and ideas you are using for the fic. You rarely find fics as good/interesting as this one so it would be a shame if you ended it - However, you trying to force yourself into writing would reflect itself into the story. Being passionate about your ideas is what makes the story captivating! Id say you could give it a longer break or look at new directions the story could move towards, that you might find more interesting writing about. Either way cheers for the good work so far!