Badges 9
Moments 49
good
this is considering the time morals, (I think antiquity era), as a protagonist wanting to leave a mark and have a prolonged and lasting legacy, the morals and ethics of the nation should guide through that, having a slow change towards that. I don't consider christian anti-hedonistic ethics to apply, as the time and mentality are not made for that, but for another approach of wanting a better lifestyle for the normal people (peasants).
ch 169 Lesson in Adhanian Customs
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
this route of character will destroy the story, one of the situations that showed the fall of rome was depravity and inmorality, if the protagonist goes this way just don't make sense, he will be crippling and destroying the future of its empire, if the ruler is like this then how can he expect the future to be?
ch 169 Lesson in Adhanian Customs
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
Why does he do all of this, invent things and still being a slave, looks like a pushover
ch 13 Brief Respite
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
Or drop the two mc idea, and focus on one
"But we would be separated," Jonathan said, concern etched on his face. "Look, it's not that I don't like working with you, I just want to build miracles. I don't want to be on the sideline anymore, I want to be on the mainstage. If you are going to invent automobiles or aircraft, then I'll build buildings, bridges, and metros."
Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World
History · SorryImJustDiamond
This is exactly what I was talking about with the power imbalance between both, one revolutionized the world while the other built higher buildings and underground, it is ridiculous the difference but he could have been smarter in negotiations, excellent businessman or alike to compensate. But no, Poul is better at all of that too. Just try to balance better the two mc idea as it is clearly not working as equals.
"But we would be separated," Jonathan said, concern etched on his face. "Look, it's not that I don't like working with you, I just want to build miracles. I don't want to be on the sideline anymore, I want to be on the mainstage. If you are going to invent automobiles or aircraft, then I'll build buildings, bridges, and metros."
Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World
History · SorryImJustDiamond
This is wrong, he is the co-founder, there is a difference between both words. One means I do it all, the other one, I do it with a team. Because both are mc, you shouldn't forget about these details, the history seems to be only of Poul, Jonathan only looks like a secondary
"I'm Poul Nielsen, founder of the Axelsen and Nielsen Air Brake Company. My specialty is mechanical and electrical engineering, though electrical engineering is in its infancy, soon it will take over the world."
Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World
History · SorryImJustDiamond
the power mechanics between the two of them don't work. Paul has new technologies never seen while being a genius in math, but jonathan only has a new idea of civil engineering (the oldest one) with the less innovation to that world, while being stupid by asking the obvious, he should have a gold tongue or something business related to balance the relationship
ch 12 Practicing the Pitch Before Demonstration
Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World
History · SorryImJustDiamond
the balance between them is extremely bad also, would prefer a big bang theory like balance, or at least Jonathan knows how to make businesses to compensate for this
ch 0 9 A Huge Blessing
Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World
History · SorryImJustDiamond
nice chapter 👍
ch 368 368. Barbarians To Belivers
I Became The Pope, Now What?
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
well, it certainly is a rare location. Almost never even mentioned in stories, hope this is repeated in other situations
Radmilo used to live in the Republic of San Marino, the fifth smallest country in the world and surrounded by Italy. However, his country could not withstand the attacks of the gate monsters. It took two years for the monsters to destroy his country.
Should I Become a Villain?
Fantasy · AFM31_ALDA
he always forgot everything, its getting annoying
ch 112 All Gather All
My Necromancer Class
Fantasy · Aero182
absolutely correct
He started pounding a fist into his own head. Hammering nonstop. "I'm stupid-I'm-stupid…stupid! Stupid! Stupid! Fucking stupid!"
Loki’s Successor System
Fantasy · SkyStrider
red flag incoming
ch 52 Honor your father
Loki’s Successor System
Fantasy · SkyStrider
sure it is, it always is
He continued, "There's a lot in it for you, Jin. If we succeed, you won't even have to work for months and months to come. Just trust me on this one; everything will go smoothly…"
Loki’s Successor System
Fantasy · SkyStrider
good chapter
ch 287 287. Drunken Pope
I Became The Pope, Now What?
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
In mining you can't increase productivity by working less, it isn't a desk job, you will only manage to decrease the output of material. What a stupid decision, even today mining is mostly done in third world countries with insane weekly hours (which is a response to our consumer society) based on this why would you enforce these ideas in a feudal society transitioning towards an industrial one. It is shooting yourself in the feet and capping your industrial idea.
It was not a glamorous life, but they would be paid a fair wage under Berengar's management and be allotted a proper forty-hour workweek with paid vacation time and sick days. It was best not to overwork your employees; if you were foolish enough to do so, you would see decreased productivity.
Tyranny of Steel
History · Zentmeister