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According to my understanding The characters that we readers are currently following NOT the main protagonist of this fanfic. But they are two main characters from two Chinese novels, Yang Chen and Yun Che. I think that Yang Chen was able to ignore the rules of cliche Chinese novels in the ATG's world because Yang Chen was a character from another novel, not Yun Che. I'm not sure if he also had Yun Che's memories from Azure Cloud Continent or not. That make him ignore ATG's plot. But don't know how much ploy he can ignore. (The real Yun che is selfish and pedophila, so i don't think he can control himself in that situation) He has the personalities of three people in one body. And his main personality was Yang Chen. Yun Che was only a secondary personality. And the last personality hasn't woken up yet. He is still Yang Chen in the MWIABCEO novel. So he was forced to do those stupid plots. That makes him still act stupid like those boring Chinese novels only in the MWIABCEO's world. That's why I hope he will wake his unknown personality to avoid those stupid and boring plots. Because the unknown personality should be the true protagonist of this fanfic and he know the plot of this 2 cliche Chinese novel.

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Since I saw that, The protagonist is going to deliver food to his wife at her company. I already know what will happen after this. And I believe every reader knows it as well as I do. After this, it will be a slap in the face role. There are stupid characters who appear to show off their wealth and insult the protagonist. And then the protagonist slapped him in the face. After that, the heroine will appear and end the problem. I just hope, can the author spoil it for me a little? Do you intend to follow in the footsteps of those boring Chinese novels? If yes, please tell me in how many chapter will this face-slapping chapter end? I'll skip ahead and read it after this plot end. I can wait for 2-3 week for update until this face-slapping chapter end and read it in one go. I hope, our protagonist will not follow boring Chinese novels. But they were Yang Chen and Yun Che, The Boring Chinese novel protagonist. It was difficult for him to overcome the rules of boring Chinese novels. Except that the third mysterious entity within him would awaken. I agree that this fanfic is very interesting. And I'm willing to follow. But I can't help but feel bored. If you have to read the same content over and over that can be found in every Chinese urban novel. And I just want to ask, when The unknown ID will awake?

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Thx for da Chap!! I'm quite disappointed. In my opinion, after reading a lot of DxD fanfic, I strongly reject joining any faction in the supernatural world. Especially the demon side, I don't like the Evil piece system. It's like a zombie virus that kills infected and turns them into zombies. And the devil race uses Evil pieces to create a pet competition game (rating game) And let them fight on the gym just like Pokemon. With the Evil pieces system, the demon race therefore hunts other creatures to enslave them all the time. Take Rias for example. This makes me have a negative bias towards the devil side in every DxD fanfic. This is just my personal opinion and personal taste. Not a reproach (Just because I don't like DxD fanfic protagonist joining any side. Especially devils) I still looking forward to next chapter! Enough complaining, I have a question. I still wonder why Arata and the others need to be reincarnated in the DxD world? Is this a regulation for accessing DxD world? Why don't the Onmyoji world and the Seven Deadly Sins world have this restriction? I remember that in the Onmyoji world, he used magic to transform himself into a child to pretend to be the son of the Tsuchimikado family. And for next world after DxD, he need to be reincarnated again? And why didn't Arata's other followers choose to become demons like him? Because in the end They would become Arata's devil servants by Evil pieces anyway. Or Arata will not use Evil pieces to make them his peerage? So I really sad a little bit. Because I want to see mysterious new Demon Lord the Astral Trinity and nobody couldn't figure out where he came from, a demon lord from another world against with the 4 demon lords of the Bible. And..... I like Sona more than Rias, but now he is Sona's brother...

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This is what I worry about. The author creates an interesting story. But there are frequent errors just like I said before. Now that the sentences are confusing Because he misplaced the sentences from the next two chapters. (chapter14 and 16 in Old version) And because he uploaded it on patreon So I'm not sure if he'll fix the mistake or not. Because in the old version of this fanfic, he didn't fix it at all.

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So, is this a remake of [DxD: The Reincarnated Gamer] the author's old work? The original work is quite good and interesting. But, there are just some mistake that the author doesn't seem to try to fix, such as the frequent use of repeated sentences or there are repeated chapter updates. It just the author doesn't seem to check it twice. I still read until the last chapter 3 mounth ago But the new version doesn't have any such flaws. And I feel like it's easier to read and understand. I hope this new version will better.

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Replied to I_am_God5

Yes! Indeed!! No Devil's slave!!!

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