This is great, really enjoying this fanfic so far, can’t wait to see how it proceeds.
ch 29 Rapid progress over the weeks. The mid-term examination begins
Book&Literature · Jaed21
Great fight scene, yet again.
ch 318 Chapter 315 : An Intense Confrontation!
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
When will he marry Ichigo?
ch 19 Chapter 19: Hikaru's Attack (2)
Anime & Comics · Iguana32
Good Pokemon fic, but y'know big sisters shenanigans need to happen. .............................................................................
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ch 18 Chapter 18: Hikaru's Attack (1)
Anime & Comics · Iguana32
Wow, what an interesting character, the big sister types, always make the best love interests.
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I thought given she was and elf and a high social class she was.
Her own experiences aside, she'd seen her young nephew's member before when he was taking a bath by the river and she thought it looked more cute than it did masculine. Maelriel's however.. Aerin thought that it could compare to those of fully grown adult's.
Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
+1 some people are stupid, dont punish the rest of us for their inadequacies.
-Don't dumb down the flowery words
TV · Giver_of_Crabs
This is fucking hilarious
Putting my hands around the back of their necks I took the pair to my tent and stripped the mother. When she panicked and tried to struggle the words 'disobedience' and 'death' stilled her. Her hot cunt felt like victory.
Book&Literature · JManM
Ahh I would agree with you if it wasnt for the sake Martial Peak's world is so massive, and by these types of paragraphs add up over time and cause chapters to be shorter, take longer etc.. and what happens when he ascends? hes gonna log around a bunch of free loaders?
A/N- About Lan Chu Die and Du Yi Shuang becoming Su Mu's servants, should I write a whole conversation for it, as in a few paragraphs, or just mention it as a passing detail, directly jumping on Dual Cultivation?
Anime & Comics · Pastlives
Their irrelevant why bother even including them, when in the higher realms their comparable to peasants and all the chicks are 10/10 later on.
A/N- About Lan Chu Die and Du Yi Shuang becoming Su Mu's servants, should I write a whole conversation for it, as in a few paragraphs, or just mention it as a passing detail, directly jumping on Dual Cultivation?
Anime & Comics · Pastlives
Characters like lan chu die and du yi shuang arent really good for the story imo, although on surface it might look good bloating a harem with members early its not, I only can hope to recommend to limit the heroines to relevant characters, as it is the best for plot flow and character development.
ch 24 They’ll Die
Anime & Comics · Pastlives
Hahahha.... Funny you say that......
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Action · Chaosking
THIS IS ART
If Deidara were to see this...
Anime & Comics · nyawdao2
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