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Putting this behind a paywall is crazy..........you can literally read this for free...... To fill up the char requirements XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP

Im on the latest chapter atm which is 90, the start i dont really remember that well, but i do remember the little show of power in the school, i kinda just assumed that the beginning wasn't that important since they were just kids, its kind of iffy at the start but overall its better than most stories i read on Webnovel so i give it a solid 9/10, and i dont know what you mean by "to make the story not sound like a 3 year old trying to recall his dream" it has the detail and even some minor things are detailed at times throughout the story, the grammar is somewhat off at times but it gets its point across despite the minor errors, overall i think you should read to like chapter 20-30 then decide if you still feel the same way, because the story shows noticeable improvement at least to me around those chapters

I rarely read on Webnovel because of how most of the stories involve harems or something like that, but this, this story is amazing, i read a lot and usually its just mindless reading that i cant get past even 30 chapters, but this story has a great plot, while there may be some minor spelling mistakes its pretty easy to ignore, the plot is good and I'm looking forward to more of this story, much love, someone who likes to read <3