Phelisa_Sontashe - Profile

focus on recovery and get better soon

the story is getting boring cause the main character is stuck at home at least make it so that he has to scavenge for food him staying in his house indefinitely is unrealistic

thanks for the chapter

thank you very much author i was losing hope in finding a berserk fan fiction you are doing a great service to all berserk fans keep up the good work and don't let negative comments influence your vision and story

I am really confused with the story it tries to portray itself as grounded and serious but the main character is only recruiting females which goes against its grounded nature. it's just a harem collecting fan fiction trying to be smart

I will be honest I thought the story had potential the MC wanted to stay away from the hero and to live his life peacefully away from all the chaos that unfolds around the hero but he contradicts himself when he is constantly helping the hero after falling unconscious to the hero's attack he could have let things play out the way they did but excluding helping the hero get the sword the MCs very stupid he claims to not want to change the story but actively helps the hero get the sword and allies early on which he didn't need to he should of simply left after the dinner with his family to rule the dukedom assigned to him this absolutely frustrated me cause he didn't owe the hero anything could of already been ruling his dukedom peacefully this is why I dropped this novel the author couldn't stock to what the MC desired which is to not be involved with the hero don't go writing that the MC wants nothing to do with the hero and then write him helping the hero I am very disappointed

honestly I am disappointed raizel shouldn't have the emotions of fear, anxiety and discomfort considering how powerful he is and his personality in noblesse. The author lacks any information on noblesse

the premise of the story is interesting but it is taking too long to get entertaining so I unfortunately dropped this fan fiction

Finally someone who doesn't mess up the story because of the presence of the ancient one

thank you very much for the chapter great work

great chapter want to see ali getting therapy from jack 😉