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Okay here goes my Review lets start with warm-up, one of the Plot hole, how the fck he is easily able to use Runes, you know if he cas use ashe wish and they are permanent why other dont do the same sht, right? maybe the reason might be the skill is rare still you told this before he had limited knowledge about runes yet here we see him easily able to use them nevermind thislets' just start the main eventhe Story at the beginning was very good, however as the chapter passed things's changed, I skipped almost 40-45 novel just cause nonstop fighting, i read in the beginning however around chapter 130 I skipped non-stop it turn that boring.you know how boring those chapters turn he fought almost every chapter leaving some exception if thre was 209 chapter right now he fought in 150-170 Chapters In the recent chapter around 200, it was freaking annoying, you know he was fighting a freaking S Rank and the fckiin mc think he can defeat it with his determination, wits, resolve whatever sht there was in him while he was just E- Rank, t

This is My Second Reivew, also Here on chapters [231] Im dropping this.Reason, its' Obvious The writing Style you have been using before chapter 200s, it was better, but after that you told about the changes in the writing style, all I could say it sucks. Honestly, Im disappointed the way you have been writing, it hurts my head. I was really Enjoying this Novel,but I just couldn't read this any longer.here's The star given for, I completely couldn't convey what I wanted to say, but just guess with this stars.2-Star for writing Quality, obvious by above message.3-Star, it was going good, but then 200 Chapters later I couldn't understand a lot of things.3.5-Star for Character development, well I couldn't give it so keep 4, but yeah Sigh I don't have words, should I say it was good whatever.5-Star for Update Stability, I couldn't deny you publish almost daily, so its' Obvious too.3-Star for World building, Again no comments, if you couldn't understand the building, what to expect.

the Narrative of the story is pretty good, if i say, i wanted to know about her past and her brother, like how did they end up in that organisation. while also the mystery of 'A', he is more smarter than he smees, and his connection, i can tell with those he can get anything about to know about FL, even if she leaves the organisation. anyways i would love to read this, the chapters are very few, but the vivid discription is good.