UnusualSubstance1 - Profile

As of Chapter 16 and below: The story begins as a horror story filling you with dread and despair as you think the world couldn't get any worse, yet every chapter you feel the main characters pain, suffering and futility. As if hope is a mere fantasy in a world where gore and suffering are common-place. The author writes a compelling and engaging story to entice us the readers in and helps paint the imagery in our heads about all the gory scenes and "adult" scenes. Furthermore, the writer uses an extensive range of vocabulary to further paint the idea that hope is merely a vanishing illusion in a world of darkness, despair and desperation. So far I think the story could get further expanded upon & hopefully the author gets recognition he deserves. I cannot wait to see the continuation of this amazing story. I am eagerly awaiting for more chapters. ~Regards, TCS [img=exp]