This is some damm good stuff. I liked that even with this kind of power, you didn't rush into action, ba*g** chicks left and right. You are more focused on developing the storyline with its charectors simultaneously. I hope you keep updating this and not abandon this theme of hypnosis, like some other writers, who had great potential, but just dropped it when the story was actually getting more interesting. keep updating this, and DO NOT drop this!! That's all.โ๐ป
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I'll suggest you to rewrite this one and note make a new one. The reason being your novel is already being in a little higher position in webnovels algorithm of suggestion. So, it's be much easier to reach to more audience than to build it from scratch.
ch 12 not a chapter
Anime & Comics ยท fade567989
isn't this, a bit too much. 7-8 is pretty acceptable don't you think.
'It is only common sense for my penis to grow to a permanent length of 12 Inches (30.5cm) and its girth to double!'
Urban ยท WhySoEvil
The concept of the fan-fic is quite fresh for me if I am being honest. The storytelling is good as well and the female characters are all that I love. Please keep it ongoing with constant updates. ๐ฏ recommend for the people of culture. ๐
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Please! someone, who's a fan of this story like me, pick this up and continue. The writer of this story has given up this goldmine. So, if you are writer and think you can continue this story in the direction the original author of this story intended to take, please consider taking this story and continuing. And I promise to provide a steady supply of PS every f***ing day till the end of this journey. So please!๐ฅบ . . P.S - Please make sure to ping me, or let me know the title of that story by replying to this comment. Hope to hear from you soon.
Common Sense Manipulation System
Urban ยท WhySoEvil