Thanks for the suggestion, it's true that it could be interesting, although the story remains within the framework of sci fi, I can introduce something similar later馃憣
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Thanks 馃檹 Hope you enjoy the future chapter!
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Thanks for the review! I'll take it into account for the next chapters!
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thanks for the review ! I try my best to add a little bit of humor. That the things I love in novels.
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If anyone sees this review, I am dea- Oh sorry! This is not the place to say such things. Well, as you can see, I am the author, a new author by the way. Before writing anything, I thought a lot, I had too many ideas, impossible to choose. So I went to look at the genres of the WSA 2023 and there it is! There I saw, the sci fi genre. There was no fantasy unfortunately, BUT I made THE choice. And after thinking and rethinking the story for a long time, creating and recreating the outline, I chose Immortal as my very first story. I sincerely hope you will enjoy my story, feel free to comment to help me improve.
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I think it's an amazing novel with a great plot, great characters and great world building. I think from the amount of comments I don't need to say it's worth reading but I'm saying it anyway.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy 路 Guiltythree