Webnovel Author: Sirius459 - Novel Collection

Nope i don't want make my character immediately become strong or too OP, i want emphasis create my character have development, having feeling fail again and again, lost something precious and overcome all of his weaknesses. PS: Thanks you for giving my book a review and i hope you enjoyed this little adventure.

After i read all the chapter i came with the conclusion about this story. First of all the dialog need some improvement it's not like reading a novel but feels like a movie script the world building you create was really nice and i enjoyed reading it so overall yeah this is a good story but need some improvement on the dialog.

well and isekai and using a system too, yeah a common story but after read the five chapter i found some a unique writing style how the author using the first person point of view to make the story really easy to read enjoyable

The five chapter i read about this story really good. How the character interact each other was a nice dialog and maybe i only read the five chapter about this work so maybe the author make the pace of this work a bit to slow to the conflict but, to be honest i enjoyed reading the five chapters

hi, thanks you for review, i hope i can always improve my writing skills after read your review about my works

after i read your five chapter of your story, i just say you have some great story you made and i really enjoyed what you made. Keep your good work!!

hmmm... i've read your story and the story it's great and have a good concept, i'm really enjoyed how your develop your character and the background of your story.

Very good novel, I have very high expectations for it. Definitively recommended. (for people who enjoyed some detective novel but with extra elf, vampire and demon.)

hmmmm.... many CEO story I've read but this work? it feels different from many ceo stories I read. The story feels refreshing and how the author makes relationship with every character was very good.

i'm really enjoyed your story and how you use the first person style to describe your story that's really amazing for me. It's really interesting to read this novel

i dont know why but, when i read the first chapter of this story i don't realize but i'm in chapter 10 of this story and i'm forgot the time when reading it.

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this novel about love and friendship, i really enjoyed your work and your story it really easy to read and it much fun to read it, i dont know why but this story bring joyness for reader.