You should write more on this novel but also make the academy volume a lot longer don’t do any time skips as there’s a lot of stuff you can do with this part of the story such as internationals, tournament training this would be relevant further down the line of the story. But above all this novel is good keep going.
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You should write more on this novel but also make the academy volume a lot longer don’t do any time skips as there’s a lot of stuff you can do with this part of the story such as internationals, tournament training this would be relevant further down the line of the story. But above all this novel is good keep going.
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