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Hmm

ch 50 50: Puppeteer and His Marionette. [1]

Lord's Authority.

Games · Oskar_04

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“An Exciting Journey into the Beast Raid Arc!” It's finally here!!! I am thoroughly enjoying the current arc of the Beast raid! You cooked for too long though. Writing Quality: Check! Story development: Check! Character Design: Crazy Crazy. World Background: A lot of lore!! As someone involved with this novel, let me give you some spoilers. The game of perceptions has just begun. The entire plot is freaking good. The best part is the smut is limited. I am lovin it! The only complaint is the update stability! (It's ludicrous)

Lord's Authority.

Games · Oskar_04

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Sarena supremacy

ch 47 47: Magnificent Heart of the <Tenacious Warrior>.

Lord's Authority.

Games · Oskar_04

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Crazy Crazy! Sarena, you go girl

ch 46 46: Awakening of the Tenacious Warrior. [2]

Lord's Authority.

Games · Oskar_04

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Replied to ordinnary

Thanks. It will be more fun from now on

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Replied to One2Turtle

When a character is alone it is considered as a writing ethic to speak in double quotes. Otherwise I would've had specifically added that Eliza heard him mumbling something.

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Replied to One2Turtle

Chapters will be here, but just like SH and RR. So, you can read LA for free here.Rejoice.

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Replied to dylan_pyle

You are absolutely right! Mongrel was telling the author to stop overworking to fill the chapters, but sad life. He is a dumbass to try and improve quality. He should've just given up on the book just like you did. After all, what can he do when people don't even understand him? I suggest the author to stop righting at all!

Sin and Virtue System

Fantasy · Oskar_04

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Replied to One2Turtle

Has my editor not answered?

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Replied to One2Turtle

Is it not?

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Replied to One2Turtle

Ask my editor, I have no time to answer such childish questions.

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Replied to Romance_guy

Don't you have something productive to do? This novel is a time waste

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Replied to Romance_guy

WHY????!!!!

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Replied to Oskar_04

Mongrel doesn't remember being close to you!

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Replied to electric_pun2005

What More? What am I? Sugar daddy? (Be specific with what you desire, Parker.)

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Replied to Oskar_04

Mongrel is scared of world.

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Replied to Oskar_04

Who are you? I don't know you.

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Replied to 0THeunkown0

Who are you?

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Don't read this man's book! He is a truthful speaker! (Bleghhh) His erotic writing is bland and the story is too good to be true! Absolutely recommended to everyone! So good that you might poke your eyes out! I hate you!