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if i could give story development a negative one on here i most definitely would. Honest to god, this story goes backwards. At first its interesting to see the mc rise. Then BAM!!!!!!!!!!, the war arc starts. Then my life fades away and dies. Prepare to immediately loose interest in this book, as all of the progression the mc did up until this point will be all for fuck all. Not only is the war arc longer than the entire story combined before the war arc. 700 chaps if i can remember correctly. Its also super fucking boring, as the mc is basically just treated as a mop the entire time. Just doing the bidding of a fucking nobody, until being put away and having to deal with all the trash in the meantime. Not only does it not make sense for him to be enlisted. Because he is a mech designer not a mech fixer. Not to mention the fact that he basically shoots his future progress in the head because he stops relying on the system in the future. from what I've read on the wiki, his ass is still a journey level mechanic 5k chapters in, not even half way done. This author knows how to throw away a good start. that's for sure.

3/5, I read 900 chaps btw don't listen to the reading status. To be brutally honest, the beginning of this story was probably the best written part of any novel I have ever read ever. Definitely fell off though in more ways than one. To be fair, riding off of what the beginning was, would be really hard for anyone; but this was not it. I can only imagine what this could have been if the main character had been a little more heartless, cold, and calculative. He was in the beginning at the very least. He even got the title lost from light, from poisoning his teammates without any hesitation, and managing to survive the first trial. Why did he have to stop there? Wasn't he willing to do anything. Where did that go. He killed his teammates for almost no reason. Where did his paranoia go? He lived as the worlds punching bag for all his life. So why does he have a heart? The second they turned him into a slave, by all means he should have killed them. When he accepted the situation for what is was, I lost all respect for him. The story besides that was worth reading but ignoring that always left a sour taste in my mouth. What pisses me off the most is the fact that he drank alcohol and then fucked up and let Cassie know his greatest weakness. That and his screwed up flaw, like it is a horrible flaw. If it was just him not being able to lie, it wouldn't be that bad, but he has to answer every question that someone asks him as well. That's like a 2 for one flaw special and if he doesn't he will literally die. Its obvious that guiltythree made his flaw super bad so that he could justify beating down sunny into being the main females slave, instead of someone who breaks through their chains, and becomes something great. tldr 10/10 reverend insanity teir mc to 0/10 pussy mc.

This is without a doubt a mid story, definitely deserves my 2.5 stars, cliche ahoy! Beware of this Chinese novel’s writing skills because they might just suck all the knowledge out of your brain. On a more serious note, there aren’t too many cliches, but it is kinda checklist, if yk what I mean. Feels like your the second person in a human centipede. Getting f*ed on both sides that is. But if your on this website it might aswell be gold.

For a large majority of this story, I had felt as if it jumped from one thing to another up until the end. I’ve read the whole thing and honestly it feels as if I haven’t read anything at all and just stared at a checklist and a log of things the main character needed to do. Not much tension tbh. It’s better than most of the stuff on here though, I would recommend it since I’ve read the whole story. 99% of this story is like lone wolf mc but there is some city building aspects late novel, no harem either. Doesn’t check any red flags.

The story’s beginning may seem iffy at first but it’s definitely top teir. If it ended at the first arc I would have no problems giving it a perfect 5/5 no questions asked. Although it doesn’t drop off immediately at the second arc. It introduces a two gimmicks to the story, which I just hate and I continually had thoughts of just dropping the story because of them. For the quality of the second arc, ignoring those two problems I would say that it was great although not as good as the first, up until the end of the second ark. Because at the very end the gimmick comes into play, in a really annoying way as well. This leads to the main character making a big choice that contradicts a large portion of what he stands for, without establishing a basis for it. Making it just feel very stupid. The third arc unarguably the worst out of all of them, also the longest if im not mistaken. Despite their not being many gimmicky moments, it still felt lackluster compared to what came before it. The main reason for this is because of a large amount of running around during this arc, due to a “necessity” of world building. If I’m not wrong it probably had the least action and by nature tension, that the story had captivated me with. Leaving me feeling like I had to skim. Despite all of the negative things I have to say, this is definitely one of if not the best Webnovel on here, surpassing all of the cliche trash this website is made out of.