Dalton_Dunson - Profile

The novel starts off alright and the nationalism isn't too prominent but the story glosses over main plot points like the reason and how the mcs mother abandoned the youngest daughter and how the Mc straight up ignores some side characters like his adopted son, like the kid is supposed to be with his parents but when he shows up the kid isn't mentioned ever again. That plus the transitions between the characters are ass, like the ship isn't fully explained for if it is literally there or just shrunken down along with some other world building settings. It's like the author wants the reader to guess what is even happening. Other than those glaring points it's alright as far as progression goes and it's an alright read up till ch 200 at least but it all added up as the story progressed. I read up till 279 but am no longer sure what is going on, the fights are back to back with little to no power scaling for the Mc he is either completely op or not their match. The overall feel from the story is a sci fi fantasy setting that doesn't understand that details need to be fleshed out and fully explained to the reader for proper understanding of the story. It could have been great but I've had enough with the discontuity.