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I love the story, world background, writing quality, story development but the only problem for me is character design I mean the mc is not the main problem but the enemies of mc I mean the one who attempted to kill her? I mean her past friend. I know the reason but let's just say the mc character is the one thing I hate because he just wanted to do it in her own just by punching? I mean sorry for the spoiler now that he know he can revenge just by waiting why don't he just hired a holdaper kidnap the boy and kill her in her own hands hays I know it pretty unrealistic to some others or even author but for me it was right to do because it's better to kill a potential threat before it can grew I mean the virtual is reality because of the gods made it to ? idk and so that.

here and I give review better compare to 1 star and this is the real review. this story is bad after reading into 1st chapter. the one thing I hate about mc is her personality. even though I read at 1wt chapter I know where the story will went well. Just read at first chapter. And the world background is quite bad because the author did Chinese novel and Korean novel a cultivation world with technology and a tower! it's exactly what you think so yeah ..

lol I just hate the story but I forgot put the others so yeahhhh

well exactly maybe author didn't search about other side character and just watch and think how the story went and that.. ya know and it was hard to focus other side character though so maybe the author didn't focus and just focus on mc

well I kinda hate the character and so what I am reader and I am giving the reviews and just saying true because I hate the character like that even many of readers and as I expected what you will said... And to tell you the truth there is no point about this discussion because it will be me will lose if it is about trash talking so yeah you win.

I was saying exactly truth bruh... I mean it was common sense a sin of pride has their own pride that mortal can know and sometimes mortal just turn blind eyes just like you create character the MC. the mc eat one of the food of sin of pride and got jailed because he ate food. and mc was just like I ATE A SINGLE FOOD JUST A SINGLE OF PIECE OF FOOD BECAUSE IM HUNGRY AND THIS IS WHAT I GET AFTER WORKING FOR A LONG TIME. I mean he was just a member and not important member into group/guild so yeah and mc is angry because he feel like he didn't do anything wrong just single mistake but it was infront of leader and worst part he has title of sin of pride I mean it was so obvious... So yeah it's look like you have years of reading experience too but not much maybe you read too much Chinese novel and got influence into one of the story you liked and copy them and to not make it obvious you change the genre like Korea novel A novel type: Towers it's was obvious it was like the tower appeared nowhere and the humanity is about to go extinction and suddenly the mana Or either level system appeared and the human fight back and after few years the mc appeared average and got suddenly heaven defying luck or treasure or something old man teaching him and many more... It was obvious story.. I mean author as a otaku you should write your own story I mean not copy them and the worst part you written the story is you copy at the sametime Chinese novel and Korea novel