my apologies if you felt like that but the purpose of this chapter was to show that even though Naruto has a lot of buffs, he could still lose a winning fight just because of his attitude (the one I've created in this fanfic). I'll re-read the previous chapters to see how different this one was and try to keep the tone of them similar to each other. I'm all ears for any suggestions that you might have.
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It's all good man, i know that your points are for the betterment of the story. Personally, I don't feel like I can describe Danzo's character without any bias because that's how he is and for the revolt part trust me, the hyugas will hate Naruto for what he's about to do 😉
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I get your point and I will surely keep all your points in mind while writing the future chapters. As for Naruto's first kill, he knew about the Uchiha massacre (the next few chapters will hint about that) and due to his training and usage of the Kyubi's hatred, he doesn't feel any regret towards it.
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It's been a pleasure 😄