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Replied to Faier

It's been a pleasure 😄

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Replied to Jack_Frost_3962

Thanks man, appreciate the support

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1yr
Replied to RainbowBeheader

Just 1. It will have some fights but the main focus will be romance.

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Replied to maxphantom

thanks man 😁

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Replied to Akash_Dongre

like gojo satoru indeed

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Replied to Shape_Matters

Hey there! I'm glad that you like this fanfic and thank you sooo much for keeping up with my first try at literature

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Replied to Captain_Apocalypse

I'm glad that you like the story. This is my first try at fanfictions and I hope that you'll like the future chapters too.

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Replied to Shape_Matters

my apologies if you felt like that but the purpose of this chapter was to show that even though Naruto has a lot of buffs, he could still lose a winning fight just because of his attitude (the one I've created in this fanfic). I'll re-read the previous chapters to see how different this one was and try to keep the tone of them similar to each other. I'm all ears for any suggestions that you might have.

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Replied to Sloth_Incarnate

I know that but I believe that his talk with Nagato should have been more enlightening than cannon and I don't think that he wouldn't be able to harness the Kyubi's hatred after that because we literally saw him do that in the anime

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Replied to Job_Less_GUY

I'd love to update it more often but sadly I've got school going parallel to this...

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Replied to CG292

I'm not giving any spoilers

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Replied to RaiDKing

also for the revolt part, the shinobi support Naruto, except a few ones, and the civilians know that if they revolt, they'll be on their own, facing the wrath of the Kyuubi

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Replied to RaiDKing

It's all good man, i know that your points are for the betterment of the story. Personally, I don't feel like I can describe Danzo's character without any bias because that's how he is and for the revolt part trust me, the hyugas will hate Naruto for what he's about to do 😉

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Replied to RaiDKing

I get your point and I will surely keep all your points in mind while writing the future chapters. As for Naruto's first kill, he knew about the Uchiha massacre (the next few chapters will hint about that) and due to his training and usage of the Kyubi's hatred, he doesn't feel any regret towards it.

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Replied to Ferus1

The story is changing for the better. I can't change the history but I'll take a lot of ideas from your comments. Thanks alot 😁

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Replied to RaiDKing

thanks for coming man. I really appreciate it. btw chapter 1's gonna change some stuff in how Konoha operates. so stay tuned!

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Replied to Daddy_yhwach

ya already know the next chapter's gonna be lit

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