tyty that means so much I've been working on it a lot! Sorry it took so long to get to you.
ch 0 2 Chapter One
Fantasy · SinnWrites
I think that you should have done a bit more character intro in the start.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2. Tiny Sinister
Fantasy · KiriDuGema
When you have some sighing put it before the diologe. "He let out a puff of air." or "He let out a long sigh."
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Fantasy · KiriDuGema
Sorry, I just noticed you said has instead of have.
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Fantasy · KiriDuGema
this made my whole fucking day omg
The Trusted Boy
Fantasy · SinnWrites