and there are many spelling and grammatical errors
Umm...the longer chapters would be better
Oh!! Interesting! But the beginning conversation killed few of my brain cells ×D. There were few mistakes, you should try proofreading the chapter a few times. The chapter was awesome!!
First of all let me congratulate you on surprising me in the first part. Who would guessed it was an rehearsal?! The story is amazing. The way you explain and narrate the plot is just amazing. I just want to be able to narrate just like you do. Unfortunately I have limited vocabulary. The plot got dark and then fun at some points. I couldn't read it completely because I am preparing for exams, sorry. Fun fact: I am just like the girl, with low self-esteem but I am a boy😂.
This book has been deleted.
The story is awesome. it is not for someone as inexperienced as me to talk but your grammar needs a little bit improvement. My very first time reading a Romantic novel but it was awesome. I hope you could improve even more so best of luck.
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original The Lord Of The Ruins: World's Nightmare
Please read the chapters first. don't make assumptions based on the Synopsis. I will update the Synopsis soon. it's not like this is fake but it's incomplete. The World Of Isernia, a mysterious world ruled by those choose by the Gods. The creators of the world, God—were amidst a state of panic and thus weren't taking care of their creation. Taking advantage, Achut—The Lord of the Ruins—with his Ruins and Seven people known as the Rulers, came to the physical realm from the Demon Realm. He challenges the God's chosen ones soon earning the name of The World's Nightmare. He with his subordinates, slowly took actions and terrorised the world. His only goal is to live happily and peacefully. While trying to figure out a way to grasp his goal, he had to counterattack the opposing countries and people. He slowly uses his wisdom to overcome the obstacles. Due to unusual circumstances, he had no choice but to take over other countries. Will he be able to accomplish his dream? Join him on this journey. Note: This is my first work ever. English language is not my first language so there might be many repetitions and grammatical errors. Please point out those mistakes as it will help me improve. Please also note that this story is my original. I have worked months to build this up. if you find any kind of similarities with other Novels, then I am sorry if it offended you. This isn't any kind of fanfic. The chapter updates might not be regular due to school so I will try my best to upload during Saturdays.7 Chs 10 Collections
I would say that your way of explaining is great. But there are so many spelling errors. The story was unique from what I have read till now. Good job. Keep it up.
(dropped bc I'ma publish it on Amazon)
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