Very good concept but the main character and plot isn't the best it could be. MC relies on his system more than he needs to and whenever he loses his system(which can and did happen) for a period he becomes much weaker. And losing his system because he killed people who would cause problems later? It's childish especially considering how long the creator of the system should be alive. Millions of years? And he still doesn't realise sometimes hard decisions need to be made for the avoidance of future problems(which by the way if it is nipped in the bud early could avoid even more people from losing their lives)But it is still an amazing read, it could just be better.
Eastern · Snoring_Panda
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Very good concept but the main character and plot isn't the best it could be. MC relies on his system more than he needs to and whenever he loses his system(which can and did happen) for a period he becomes much weaker. And losing his system because he killed people who would cause problems later? It's childish especially considering how long the creator of the system should be alive. Millions of years? And he still doesn't realise sometimes hard decisions need to be made for the avoidance of future problems(which by the way if it is nipped in the bud early could avoid even more people from losing their lives)But it is still an amazing read, it could just be better.
Reincarnated as an Energy with a System
Eastern · Snoring_Panda