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Thanks a lot. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it.🧡

Okay. The real story starts from Liu Mei’s frustration and then, interaction with her father. I believe that’s a potentially better intro.

I totally loved reading this✨. There’s not much to say since the book is only just starting but it was a really good read. Although I feel like the beginning is a little distracting. What I mean is that there were a lot of information, that could have been added bit by bit later on, that you explained at the beginning. And it’s not bad in itself, but I believe that when writing on apps like this, it’s important to make the beginning as catchy and attention-grabbing as possible. In all, it became more interesting towards the end of the chapter, I loved it and I’m looking forward to reading more chapters.❤️

Thank you!✨

Interesting book! I enjoyed reading it. There are a few typographical errors here and there but overall, it’s a good book. Good job, author.

This book is amazing! I love your choice of words and I love the fact that it gets better as the story progresses. Great job, author. Expecting more updates!❤️

Thanks a lot for this. I’ll update soon.