Mo_jo

11mth

Commented

"Can't believe that sly fox had the bag and didn't tell me." Luke fused but laughed at the end. "What happened to you, D? How'd you get rid of the cops chasing you?"

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Sci-fi · joshua_jt3

Mo_jo

11mth

Commented

I'm batman

Even though he was cornered, Dezhong didn't give up hope. He held the bag tighter and planned to slide right under the dark figure's legs the second he got closer to it. However, as he ran toward the figure, it too started running toward him at a scary speed. With the blink of an eye, the figure already caught up to Dezhong but instead of attacking him as he thought it would, it jumped over and started beating, biting, clawing, and devouring the other men that were chasing after him.

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Sci-fi · joshua_jt3

Mo_jo

11mth

Commented

Dezhong said his final prayers and ran as fast as he could, hoping and praying internally for the men not to catch up to him. As he was running, he caught a glimpse of blue, red, and yellow twinkles falling past him, followed by a dark, large figure which intentionally stood in his path. Although he thought of changing directions, there was nowhere else for him to go. In front of him was what looked like a creature from the underworld and behind him were men who wanted to do the unspeakable to him.

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Sci-fi · joshua_jt3

Mo_jo

1yr

Posted

I like how he started explaining the book and he did it in a brief way. The chapters end in ways that make you want to read the next chapter. This book has a bright future.

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Sci-fi · joshua_jt3

Mo_jo

1yr

Commented

This book has been deleted.

Mo_jo

1yr

Commented

😭😭😭😭😭

This book has been deleted.

Mo_jo

1yr

Commented

This book has been deleted.

Mo_jo

1yr

Commented

" Max, what's happening?" He asked in a rather worried state but his friend wasn't responding. CJ stood at a safe distance, watching his friend body go through a painful change. Max's toes curled in ways that weren't normal then his feet followed. His ankles and femur bones tore through his legs, showing his muscles and blood that was gushing out. His thigh and pelvis bones were next to come out, forcing some of his flesh to fall out. The gruesome torture continued up to his ribs, sternum, spine, collar bone, arms neck and even his head. His skin was left on his bed, torn in many pieces without a skeleton holding it in place. Max was now looking like a certain creature from a famous anime with his bones and muscles showing.