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“Brain” the broker is very bad

This is a Chinese MTL fanfic, but it's very good and has almost no Chinese references that no one understands and the protagonist has a celebrity.

I found it unnecessary

I don't like most Chinese fics they are uncreative.

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Exaggerating, 50 times the gravity and very similar to Naruto, "idiot: but Sakura Tsunade and Guy are very strong and can lift tons" Sakura and Tsunade's strength comes from their chakra control and Guy has trained basically 3/4 of his life and only has incredible feats when he opens the gates , gravity affects every cell in the body, this includes organs, if someone has 2x gravity, even moving their neck the wrong way can end up breaking it the humans in the God of high school verse are physically much more durable compared to the Naruto verse, There is already a record of ninjas who died from shallow cuts.

One of the things I didn't like is that even though the protagonist has an incredible body, whose physical strength surpasses anyone in the world of Naruto, he doesn't train any of Naruto's countless martial arts God of high school.

Why did you remove the toru?

The narration is usually very fast and in third person and few character interactions generally only show how impressed they are with the protagonist .

Exaggerating but I've seen worse, like destroying all the robots in the entrance exam, and the protagonist still has the mentality of being in an anime, he doesn't realize that this is his reality now.

The story itself has some cliché elements, but these days it's kind of inevitable.

This seems very Chinese, if you try to change the story, it usually starts out good but over time it turns into an open sewer.

I hate these super convenient things like a dragon that can transform

These things about Taoism and cultivation are boring as hell, to begin with there are 173947469 levels of cultivation, you are "immortal" but you can die and you have to spend 3/4 of your life cultivating, the rest of the time is spent looking for cultivation materials, no matter how good you are at fighting, if someone has 0.1% better cultivation than you, you can no longer defeat them and there will be an imbalance in talents. finding a person who did what you did took 1 year in 1 week because he is a legendary genius who appears every 10385949 years. and there are the protagonists, always with "he was trash but he found a legendary treasure or an inheritance and it was awesome" here comes the classic "I'm going to hide to surprise everyone" as discreet as someone who wins the lottery and takes out the trash by helicopter.

The bonds are forced, the protagonist is not charismatic even more so now.

I should have stopped reading after chapter 17, before that I still had a good opinion about this fic.