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I love this novel already despite the fact it only has 5 chapters yet. It's of course a lovely concept and I am in! Mermaids, mermaid and human love... you say mafia!Of course I am in love with this already. Hope for more chaps and I am hugh hopes for this work.Keep up the good work author.

I was the type that only stick to romance but I have lately into these other genres.After reading the eraly chapters I came here to post this review.From what I got, this is interesting and I would love to recommend this to others. As the synopsis was also giving the interest, I jumped up to read the early chapters.Grammer is okay. It worth your time. 👍Keep up the good work.

I love your synopsis so much. The start. It sounds like a poet.After reading the early chapters, I am now invested and would keep this in my library of course. Keep up the good work.

okay! Now this is new for me.I usually always stick to just fantasy romance but now I am thinking of tryimg this out.with the four chaps uploaded so far, I am pretty happy and I finally found I have somw interest in this.Would like for more chaters.keep up the good work.

Already a new book? I am in!Omegaverse!We have got a duke!And a little sister too!I love it. Keep up the good work.Please update more though dude.

the description.the one that you have under the book.

First!Hello author! I am here to give some ideas in early chapters!I loved the first chapter but what concerned me was the synopsis. Many people including me get an idea or the theme of your book through thr synopsis so just this sentence wasn't enough to get an idea.I started out with many mistakes and many authors recommended me that synopsis should be one of the most attrac tive parts. So I hope you will soon upload a proper synopsis.Over all, I would rate this now and I hopw to read more.Thank you. Keep up the hard work.

Hi author, I like your book.But I have a reccomendation for you. I think you shuld add more tags because it will be easier us to find its theme. I personally lilove how how synopsis was written. Kind of feel like poetries. Very interesting.Keep up the good work. I would not mimd posting another review later when this has more chapters. ❤

I forgot to tell..Yoir story is qritten well, decent writing style.But why only thr synopsis have so much mistakes?I was wodering.Ypu should pay attwntion to it...thank you.

I like ypur story.Well, who hates mafia stories where we have a queen FL?!Of course I love this.But I wanted to tell this specially.You have sais temporery synopsis. But...it still need to be perfect, isn't it?I saw quesntions marks are nowhere to see. That sometimes annoyes the readers who care about grammer and perfect looking novel. They read it first so it must be perfect.I am not a peofessional author. I also do a lot of mistakes. But this is something I got infirmed when i was a new author..Thr story doing good.That's why i like it.Author, i have one morr question.I am not fluent with english so i must say this first.But i am a little confused with purpose of your title's" ' "Game's or Games of the mafia queen?Author have all thr rights to wrote as you want. But I just confused and need an answer from the author...🤗Kewp going author... Please do synopsis I am aure it will attract more readers to read this story.Thank you for writing this. 🙏

5 stars! Cause why not?😉Okay the title tells you evrything.It's all bout boys and yakuzas. Thos fans that love mafia stories, characters with powerful auras...Here the work for you.I ould recommend this for any BL fan with no compliants...Try it out. I am aure you will love it just like me.Kepw going author..

I am not a huge sci fi fan. But fl and ml is so fine they kept me for some time here. But as i said this is not my cup of tea. But I appreciate this work. So far evrything seem to flow well and I like it honestly your writing style.I would recommend this to those who would lovw to read in this type.You can start a new work author. I am sure there will be peoplw to hug them with live..Goo luck...

I would like to give you some ideas about what I like here.I appreciate your writing style. I can see you like the horror genre when I read this. I love this even though I m not a huge horror fan. But from as far I read, I like the way the story flows smoothly.Mystery and everything perfect. I love this to have more chapters and looking forward to it. Gotta read it real seriously. Kepw going author...

5 stars!Thr synopsis was really good. That's jist so cool!I love your writing style. I am not a huge romance fan of works where couples have all the hardships to get together. It really makes me sad. But it's not that I don't like this concept. This is a concept ypu can be thr most creative.Seeing this work again, it aroused my interest to try it. So I jusr read few vhaptersand came herr to tell you.Author, count me in. I will join in this joirney.My library is now full. Still guess I will quivkly try to finish all those chapter.Pease don't stop author. Keepo going❤

Hello, I am not a fan of harem But obsessive husbands? well, I ahould try it.The title is good. Most of the time, I thought long titles are not captivating. But tiday I learnt that's not The title is thr first best thing you have done. That's what made mw want to try it.I am lazy guy so I am sorry but your synopsis is way too ling for me. So I stopped reading it halfway and moved to the first chapter to continue.Because thr synopsis always have that tiny little words, making thr synopsis too long might not be a good thing for aome people.Whatterv! Some people live long and well described synopsis Just my lazy ass can't get over with it.😁Okay author. Let me come to the point.I love this. The concept is good as it's actully been long since I felt so reading a book.All I could say is keep going author. This will be a big hit in the future. And cosider me as a your fan from now on.❤

I love it!Enemies to lovers? Is this competing for WPC this month? Then count me in me, I will support you with some votes.👍I would like to recommend you use a different book cover with a little more attractiveness.Like some cool couple...Well, that's your book so it's your decision. But readers still look at the cover first before reading. I feel your book cover should change into something elseI am sorry if it offended you. I just told my idea as a reader wandering around the cover and the synopsis before thinking if I should read this. I guess there are more like me.I love the story I am not gonna tell anything else.Since it's only been 2 chaps, I will post another review one day when I got to read more. Thank u author for working hard on this. Keep going.