.... the story is paced fast but I think it's fine and also somewhat intentional. .....The characters are still in introduction phase and I hope I can see other characters in a little detail ............... The world building is quite good and every chapter adds a little to the building of world and deepens the working of the world .............. The power level are quite balanced .......... You can give it a try once it has more chapters.
Fantasy · 7th_Reader
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.... the story is paced fast but I think it's fine and also somewhat intentional. .....The characters are still in introduction phase and I hope I can see other characters in a little detail ............... The world building is quite good and every chapter adds a little to the building of world and deepens the working of the world .............. The power level are quite balanced .......... You can give it a try once it has more chapters.
Have fun writing
Fantasy · 7th_Reader