Last chapter is not sitting well with the storyline because in the story Matthew and Serenity never seemed to be in a romantic relationship... their love seems platonic for me as a reader so the last chapter kinda ruined the storyline... also there was never any proper explanation given to serenity about the Rose tattoo.. it would have made a good plot in the end..everything was nice but the ending chapters are a bit hurried and disconnecting they don't have a flow in the storyline...
Urban · Naomi Jordan
Dear Author please don't leave this story with open ending leaving their ending to readers's imagination.. this is your story and only you guys can give it a perfect ending whether Alicia went back or Harold came to her timeline is the ending you decide so please give them a closure or another beginning with another ending...dotn leave them hanging in two different worlds waiting for you to give them their happy ending...
Fantasy · ThatAmazingGirl
Well written story
ch 41 Lusty Affair in His Office
Urban · Realfantasies
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Last chapter is not sitting well with the storyline because in the story Matthew and Serenity never seemed to be in a romantic relationship... their love seems platonic for me as a reader so the last chapter kinda ruined the storyline... also there was never any proper explanation given to serenity about the Rose tattoo.. it would have made a good plot in the end..everything was nice but the ending chapters are a bit hurried and disconnecting they don't have a flow in the storyline...
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Urban · Naomi Jordan