Make reaction chapters, and don’t keep timeskipping. Also to many only 1-4 paragraphs for many of his inventions, make it like the newspaper again, show many reaction from several characters please.
ch 23 The Coming Of War II
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
Shisui is overrated, he in the original is a complete loyal soldier for the Leaf village, and doesn’t have the greatest loyalty towards the Uchiha, and I doubt he completely cared for Itachi either… Author, can you not make huge time skips, maybe only months or a year or perhaps you can make chapters that explain what has happened in the passing of time. I want to see certain characters reactions to the newspaper. Personal bias but I feel like Isaac is to focused for the Leaf, him conquering the fire daimyo, and the Leaf village so that he can rule the other 4 is good but I feel like Isaac would make things equal, and as such not give advantages primarily to the leaf. (Biased: Hopefully when Isaac rules the world eventually, he gives each of the hidden villages equal treatment or he eliminates all of the hidden villages including the Leaf village, and creates a new nation.)
ch 22 The Coming Of War I
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
Author, u dead?
ch 240 Professional Older Brother
Fantasy · Anit666
Author why delete Fate/Despair, I haven’t read it, it has good reviews?
ch 0 3 Important Update
Anime & Comics · EdgyTheWriter
There can be several reasons, and not knowing means you can also be the one who is blind.
"You're right, I don't know what it was like before. Perhaps that is why I can see the truth where you are blinded." Thor continued, knowing full well that they were repeating an argument that they had many times prior to this. "And if we truly were the Celestials success, why would they allow the Deviants to kill us. In fact, why, if they are so great and powerful, did they allow the Deviants to live?"
Anime & Comics · Carrots123
It’s 6 moons with 1 of the moons having a moon of its own
We're talking about a world brimming with unexplored regions and unique lifeforms completely foreign to Earth. Advanced technology, giant beasts and sea monsters that can swallow ships. Not to mention the seven habitable moons orbiting the planet and the different sentient species living on their surface.
Anime & Comics · Professor_Zzyzx
Why give Kaku such a lame fruit, there are so many better fruits!
ch 89 An Era Stranger Than Imagination I
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
Who are you, are you the originals brother, clone, doppelgänger? Also when exactly did the original die in the last year, decade or century new author?
ch 240 Professional Older Brother
Fantasy · Anit666
Arthur! Please work on your other work more instead!
ch 57 Epilogue09-Guilt and Family
Book&Literature · Gladiusx
Have a reaction chapter to a white walker fighting, and easily killing powerful warriors like it’s nothing please. Also Robb being able to warg many horses did not make so much sense, he should not have that type of power, Bran should. Also, where is Euron Greyjoy?
ch 150 Time to Think
TV · Carrots123
If this is the injustice universe, Batman would not, he did not forgive Damian for murdering much less a stranger. Just take them to jail.
Esau had a long way to go if he wanted to get onto Batman's level, that's why the very same hero wanted to teach him. Just like Dick, Esau had the potential and raw talent to actually surpass him and he didn't want talent like that to go to waste or end up in the wrong hands. But he also knew that Esau would never accept his training outright, Barbara had described his distaste and anger for superheroes quite vividly and so would spurn their offer for help.
Anime & Comics · Carrots123
When are you coming back! 😭
ch 239 Finalised deal
Fantasy · Anit666
Fire is hot.
`They are preparing for war`
Book&Literature · Eden_of_Kovir
Why would they start a rebellion when there is a Targaryen on the throne still!
Instead, Robb responded, knowing that his mother would not be pleased with him talking to His mother. "House Greyjoy has started a Rebellion, Jon, and Father has gone to War," Robb said instead, knowing that his mother would not be pleased.
Book&Literature · Drinnor
Shisui is not kind dude, watch an analysis YouTube video of Shisui.
ch 29 Hypocrisy I
Naruto: Shadows Of Perfection
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence