As far as I read from chapters 1-20, it's interesting, there is indeed a plot hole but I don't care much about that, I won't comment on grammar or anything like that, and Hannya focuses on stories'. the story presented is very interesting, but sounds a little stiff, it needs a detailed explanation of the characters and the world's background, that reviews from me.
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As far as I read from chapters 1-20, it's interesting, there is indeed a plot hole but I don't care much about that, I won't comment on grammar or anything like that, and Hannya focuses on stories'. the story presented is very interesting, but sounds a little stiff, it needs a detailed explanation of the characters and the world's background, that reviews from me.
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Fantasy · Sir_Kurniawan