MommaShak - Profile

Amazing stories! Great characters, wonderful descriptions, cohesive plot, just the right amount of smut! Definitely an author to watch out for. Can't wait to read more from Holly Roberts!!

Lovable, relatable characters. Immersively descriptive locations. Fantastic well thought out story line. No grammatical errors worth noting. While it was shorter than I usually like, the story was fully completed and didn't feel rushed. Definitely worth the read. I pray the author realizes just how good this novella is. Keep writing; I can't wait to see you published!

I wish there was a way to report this book, or at least find out if the original story's author approved it. This book continues from a series that begins with Hybrid Aria by Jessica Hall which contains 5 books as of now. Axel is one of her children. Drake and Tate are in another of her books as well. While I find the story interesting, no one should be leeching off other people's work. The descriptions are decently done, just need a bit more to fill them out. The grammar and structure leave a lot to be desired. POV is often unclear; as well as it changes within the paragraph (i.e. using "I" for Cassie's POV, then immediately referring to "her"), sometimes even in the same sentence. Word choice is definitely on point with a fantastic vocabulary. As I know this is a platform for aspiring authors as well, please consider this constructive criticism. I could enjoy your writing with a little more editing, and your own story.