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The MC ist the Son of GOD and his Character is like: An Idiot and that nearly kills himself in the first 10 chapters. An Coward who fears his Guardian who is half his size (don´t forget he is the SON OF GOD) and lets command himself arount by HIS HELPER. Why make the MC SON OF GOD if you want to tell the Story of a standart Loser

Mc is simple stupid. Why doesn´t he tell Gokus is a Saiyen? Why doesn´t he tell that he got reborn in a world with aliens and magic dragons? He wish for Goku and frinds to become stronger .... Why not teach Goku?

The Mc is extremely dumb again and again dangerous fight somewhere... he must go there to die something is strange with his body .... he doesnt care and such

Went from to good to extremely bad! His Teacher talks 2 sentence and he forget 12-15 years of abuse from the Village. Why even bother to bannish him if everything is just vorgotten in the fist 5 Chapters.

- Charmander is at the beginning quality puple and chapter 18 suddenly red? - Plotarmor extrem (he can outrun FLYING Beedrill and like Anime move through the Forrest with no resistance from wild Pokemon) - He Levels Pokemon like in game = "fighting" defenceless Pokemon ... why not level Charmander to max by burning down the Forrest if its not necessary that the enemy fights back? - Why does he care about the Plot of the Anime? The world doesn´t end without Ash ...not like Dragonball where Goku is needed for survival - He travels alone because he wants become strong faster. Why? does he die if he isn´t the best in a Week? Why isn´t he enjoying live? He has a second chance to live a dream and he treats it like work. (english isn´t my Main language, so sorry for bad writing)

Chapter 50: 5year old Harry fucks 7 30-40year old women and I ask myself if he ever will reach Hogwarts He says he wants a relationship and sex ist just a part of it but fucks everything that moves