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Luna_Frost_20
LV 1Where fantasies prevail...
2022-08-02 Joined IndiaBadges 7
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I highly appreciate it.
The story is intriguing and makes me feel like I am watching an incarnation anime but with better details. Honestly, good job author! It kind of lures you(reader) in....
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Thank you soo much馃槏馃槏馃槏
You work is quite different and unique, I like how you kept the paragraph short, which makes the reader want to read more. Good strategy there. I loved the way you have described the setting slowly. Keep updating more!
ch 0 1 Chapter one: A letter from emperor
My throne
History 路 aleksandra_pano10
Sure, will do that!
"Sumi" She saw the sides of her body completely wrecked in havoc. Her abdomen was lowly doomed with the amount of thrust she had driven inside of her body due to the soul blade. Her overflowing eyes and pale face was unobtrusively saddened by the loss of her only friend with whom she was about to have their babies get together. An irony wasn't it? One lost his mother, one lost her child and it suited both of them very well. Sumitra could never see her child, nor Anay could ever see his mother. Diana for perse didn't even have the chance to hold her own baby in her warmth. She sadly chuckled to herself after realizing the death grope of their fates. For Sumitra, Anay was struck to the fate of growing without a mother and so for Diana herself she was struck to the fate of parenting without a child.
Enchanted - Echoing Souls
Fantasy 路 Luna_Frost_20
Thank you so much, I will do that.
ch 0 1 Prologue
Enchanted - Echoing Souls
Fantasy 路 Luna_Frost_20
The confusion is quite overwhelming at start but it blends nice after a while. If you could keep the information releasing at a pace little slower it would help the reader to go smoothly with the story line. Other than that, the writing is really good and loved the way you showed the story.
ch 0 1 We Need A Lawyer
Mr. Lawyer - The Advocate With A Demon Inside.
Fantasy 路 1AM
Thank you so much. I will keep that in mind and do that.[img=recommend]
Thank you 馃グ
ch 0 1 PROLOGUE
Enchanted - Echoing Souls
Fantasy 路 Luna_Frost_20
I thought that they the police outrun them and came from front, Clever thinking author.
ch 0 1 The End of the line
Shdhdh
Fantasy 路 wookie0_
Yes. Been working on it. And trying to improve every day. Thank you so much for your reviews and votes馃グ
Enchanted - Echoing Souls
Fantasy 路 Luna_Frost_20