Webnovel Author: Homeless_Traveler

"If I find it interesting enough, I might help you hide from the academy. They have already started the investigation to look for a dark creature" he smirked

Ciobara's Reincarnation

Fantasy · Eclipse_Ranger

Homeless_Traveler

1yr

Commented

Do you mean the former? The latter would be Cio

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Ciobara's Reincarnation

Fantasy · Eclipse_Ranger

Homeless_Traveler

1yr

Posted

The author did an excellent job of narrating the story. The writing quality is also great, though some punctuation problems can be seen in some parts. Other than that, there's nothing else to nitpick. Keep going! (fire)

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Homeless_Traveler

1yr

Replied to Aira_Rin

Thank you for your reviews!

The Absurdity That Is Us

Teen · Homeless_Traveler

Homeless_Traveler

1yr

Replied to Rin_Nurnia

Thank you so much for your reviews!

The Absurdity That Is Us

Teen · Homeless_Traveler

Homeless_Traveler

1yr

Posted

The first conflict was introduced quite slowly, and honestly, I thought this work would be boring. But I was wrong; the story is actually very good! Moreover, the writing was very neat. Looking forward to this story's completion!

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Homeless_Traveler

1yr

Posted

The sentences are a bit awkward and confusing, but at least it got the story... I'm hoping for this novel's future improvements. Keep writing!

The Deal With The Deviless

Fantasy · BLACK_LIGHT_

Homeless_Traveler

1yr

Commented

I think you also need to put 'abusive content warning' at the start of this chapter

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Homeless_Traveler

1yr

Commented

I wonder why the police didn't take the kids to psychologists...

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Homeless_Traveler

1yr

Commented

This might be a wild idea, but I think a predator is scarier than a predictor...

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Homeless_Traveler

1yr

Replied to Zieve1

Thank you for your reviews! :D

The Absurdity That Is Us

Teen · Homeless_Traveler

Homeless_Traveler

1yr

Posted

I must say that I haven't read a story like this ever in my life. Moreover, the writing is very neat, so I could enjoy the story smoothly. Looking forward to how the story will turn out!