PLS ERASE THIS HAREM TAG, THE STORY SHOWS NO SIGNS YET HOPE YOU CAN RECONSIDER PLS. HAVING A HAREM WILL RUIN THIS GOOD STORY
the premise is really unique, And Pls fix your grammar and make a fighting scene and not just skip things.
No Chinese name pls I beg you, Translate it
Are you alright out there? The last message you sent here, was that you were deployed inn th Ukraine Russia war.
I remember I have read this before, I dropped it because the author redefined how chakra works in the Naruto world and it was done In a horrible way, it leaves too many plot holes basically digging a grave for himself.
PLS no Multiverse story, It gets boring and you'll ran out of ideas by then and the story will no longer make sense by then
The story is good, you just need to really organise things, and also change her name and refer to the new name not the previous one 'Venus'
NEXT CHAPTER WHERE
is this a translation l, because I read pirate king mentioned instead of one piece.
I know this is a danmachi fic it is already expected to ba a harem, but I really wish it weren't a harem in a fanfic at least, im tired of seeing harem tags
Danmachi: The Magic Grandmaster
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