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ch 14 Beginning of an Empire
Fantasy · CultivationKing
This is going to be hard to review because I can’t really pinpoint anything they’ve done specifically well because it’s all top notch, really the grammar and descriptions are scarily good they make me feel insecure.
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At least he gave him an option?
"I'll be back, whether you die or not does not matter, so do what you want" he said before closing the door, leaving Mobn by himself, as he started to feel a rising pain thoughout his whole body.
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Skin...
Mobn was unable to recognise the place he was in, the room was well illuminated by artificial light, no windows were to be seen, if there were they had been covered by what Mobn assumed to be skin that covered the walls, ceiling and ground of the room, he had faintly nourrished the hope that it was animals or monsters hide but seeing the shape of a human face on his right crushed the meagre hope.
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This is actually scary
"Listen here you dipshit, I don't have all night, I don't need you to tell me nor do I need concrete proof to know that you are fucking snitch" spoke Vlasfimia in an eerily calm tone, for most of it at least.
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Thanks for highlighting the mistake
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mostly villain
ch 19 King of Egypt
Deus Ex Machina: Evolution System
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