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Itz_JayJ

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No paper no pencil but I'm still drawing attention-tough vibes

2022-08-05 Joined Global

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It's pretty good. Usually system novels are cringe to me but this isn't. I'll probably keep this as a go to read.

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All that for 1 exp point smh.

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He don't want her aint nothing gay about that😮‍💨.

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Please no 😭

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What about his girlfriend? Either Aoroi is still naive or his betrayal and heartbreak wasn't that bad.

He locked eyes with a pretty girl in the front row who batted her eyelashes and offered a flirtatious smile. Blood rushed to Aoroi's cheeks. He wasn't used to such attention, especially from someone so attractive.

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While this is an interesting turn of events, I do think Aoroi should've added a condition. It's like he completely forgot his whole reason for revenge. So I think it would've added to the revenge idea if he said something like " I'll choose the second option but help me get revenge on someone" or similar in that idea.

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I didn't give you a 5/5 because in the words of one of my English teachers, "Nothing is perfect". This does not detract from my positive thoughts about the writing. I believe the describing and flow is impeccable. Personally, I like novels that I can picture myself as the narrator or protagonist. Yet, it's novels like this that just have good writing that doesn't deter me away from reading. In conclusion I like it and that matters.

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