Badges 10
Moments 18
I have the same theory 🤭
ch 249 Late night talk (2)
The Knight's Mysterious Maid
History · Violet_167
Is it hot in here or, is it just me?
"Ah!" Annalise gasped as his right knee was placed between her legs, dangerously close to a place it shouldn't be near ever. She didn't have to guess that he was also thinking of her with a lack of clothing.
The Knight's Mysterious Maid
History · Violet_167
This is going to be fun, I look forward to the next chapter 🤭😅
ch 228 Calm (2)
The Knight's Mysterious Maid
History · Violet_167
This chapter is so sweet ❤️
ch 222 Family (1)
The Knight's Mysterious Maid
History · Violet_167
Better indeed 😉
"What if I were to suddenly need you? Wouldn't it be much better to have you near?"
The Knight's Mysterious Maid
History · Violet_167
Beatrice getting so ahead of herself 🤣
"My grandchildren," Beatrice clapped her hands.
The Knight's Mysterious Maid
History · Violet_167
You should avoid using the word ”okay” for it doesn’t fit an historical setting. Instead, depending on the context, you could use: yes, alright, fine, of course, I shall, as you wish…
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The Grand Duke's Soulmate
Fantasy · Rana_Chim_Chim
I kind of feel inconfortable with the plot at this point. I think I would have preferred that the ML may have to marry the FL to protect her (with actual good reasons) but that story then builds up their relationship towards trust and consent leading the both of them to intimacy. I do not find enjoyable to read that both their consent was thrown out to the window to excuse their first night together. The use of an aphrodisiac potion that leads to death unless the victim has intimate relations with anyone feels very arbitrary and disturbing…
ch 10 Memories Of Last Night
The Grand Duke's Soulmate
Fantasy · Rana_Chim_Chim
I have just binge read your novel and I look forward to reading the next chapters ❤️
ch 50 Congratulations
The Earl’s Deception
Fantasy · Chichii
Little piece of advice, avoid using “okay” in historical fictions as it bumps the reader out of the story. “OK” was used in print in the US from about 1839, whereas “okay” dates back from mid-20th century. Instead, you could use words such as fine, well, well enough, good, alright, etc.
"I am okay. Thank you."
The Earl’s Deception
Fantasy · Chichii
I love this kind of comments 😍
After two long hours, I was finally finished with the preparations. My body was decorated with a gold evening dress with a bertha neckline, which exposed a lot of my shoulders that I was not really comfortable with. The corset inside almost choked me and it was very hard for me to breathe. Was it normal for women to use such an uncomfortable dress? I was not used to wearing such a beautiful and elegant dress as I used to wear only plain dresses back then. This dress was indeed gorgeous as it was adorned with beautiful embroideries, but I would rather not use it twice. I think I would faint if I wore this dress for any longer than one hour.
My Long Lost Mate
Fantasy · winterdaisy55
Ice pack? In a late 18th century setting? How strange 😅
He chuckled and handed me an ice pack, "Hold this against your cheek, it will help." I took the ice pack away from his hand and held it against my burning cheek. But before the ice pack touched my cheek, he gave me a quick peck on my cheek. "This will help too, but not as good as me licking you," he smiled, leaving me dumbfounded by his action.
My Long Lost Mate
Fantasy · winterdaisy55
But right now, he managed to get his revenge and wiped out the Blue Moon pack, restored the glory of the Howling Wolf pack, and now he would get his revenge on Iris for what her father had done to him and his family.
The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter
Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep
This story is truly captivating and I cannot wait to see where it will lead the 2 main characters 🤩 You are really doing a great job at keeping the intrigue entertaining and having the ML and FL’s relationship slowly (and healthily!!!) growing. I would also like to share a writing comment: I noticed that, in your story, you have been using some “modern” terms such as “PTSD” or “drama queen”, among others… You should be aware that immersion into a story set in the past (whether it be in a fantasy world or in our actual world) comes out more difficult when using contemporary terminology. For example, even though symptoms of PTSD have been documented for literally thousands of years, the term “post-traumatic stress disorders” has only been coined during the second part of the 20th century… In order to improve your writing and provide a better reading experience, I advise you to make more research about the time in which the story would be taking place if it had been in our world (and not a fantasy one) and perhaps read more documented novels that take place during the same period as the one from which you are drawing inspiration. In the meantime, keep up the good work! 😉
ch 28 PTSD (1)
The Baroness Misbehaves
Fantasy · Sky_Li_9922
This novel is somewhat promising, but you should really completely cut out the sleeping/bathing/eating/dining scenes that aren’t relevant to the actual plot (which is still not quite precise at this point of the story) and get the story more action-oriented. Mauve should try to find some ways to be useful in her new home and to find some sense of purpose in her life. She and Jael ought to have actual conversations and get to know each other. It’d also be interesting to know more about the vampires, their origins, their history, the politics with the humans…
ch 86 86. Inauspicious Reasons
The Vampire King's Possession
Fantasy · GinaStanley
The wait is finally over and on a scale from one to ecstatic, I’m ecstatic!
Side Story Chapter 1
Under the Oak Tree
Fantasy · Suji Kim
Great chapter ❤️
ch 262 Connected (2)
The Knight's Mysterious Maid
History · Violet_167